Whatever the topic is for Teusday(4/26). Since I don't know yet. Ohwait it is more critque reveal.

I liked the Stained glass.

I also liked the truth-ness for 3 minutes, but that I had a thing about.


The stained glass really spoke to me about religious intersections with life.

Also, I am nothing if not a craftsman, so I could really appreciated a piece that has a lot of workmanship behind it.

Those kind of things end up being my favorite kinds of art. Usually.

I like the ambiguity about whether it is for or against religion. The debate that could spark is delicious.

It's too bad the cross on the middle panel didnt show, but that's life. I've certainly gotten used to times when the material decides that physics is more important than art.

The bastard.

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I liked the truth giving for 3 minutes.

But I have one little itty-bitty comment. I don't like how that the fact that you are going to tell us that you are doing it influences us to ask less embarrassing questions.


Or at least the people who know you.

I think this could be easily worked around by finding a bunch of creative and less personal people to ask you questions.

Only thing I wanted to mess with really. Other than that it's gr8.

I liked your answers, very personal.


Hope it can be pushed even farther.
Good narrative voice too.


And that's it.

Too tired to be witty. Thursday's post.

"I would say that an important part of learning any language is being able to violently swear at people in it."

That was unrelated.


More great pieces today.

I really liked the acting one.

About alcohol. And his mother.

The way he pulled off those scenes were really moving. And while I agree that there could be something done to make it more clear who is who (in the second act), the piece overall is really great.

The emotional contrast (from the first scene to the second) was pulled off beautifully.

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As for a project that could use a bit of improvement...

The paint one, on the feat.

It is a good premise.

The only limiting factor is length. If it were say... twenty feet long, it would be much stronger.

That increase of distance is what is needed to really illustrate the steps and length of the relationship. It would show progression through time, as well as make the transitions of paint more meaningful.

But it is still a very good thing for this project.

Cheating is the only thing so far I have seen the class do that is a confession of doing a wrong.

Good on ya.



Anyways.

GIT OUT!

I'M TIRED 'N NEED A NAP!

And that's it.